Crit feedback
For the crit today, I took the same presentation boards as I did for the last one and the logo developments although I didn't end up showing them as the crit was with different people than the last time so it was a chance to get a different outlook and different opinions on the concepts.
This is the feedback I brought back from the session:
I was disappointed that there wasn't much more that anyone said other than that it was an interesting topic to work with and that I would have to be careful not to offend people. Fred suggested taking it down a much more fun and light hearted route than I had been thinking of which has now left me more confused than I was before the crit as to where to go with it.
I could change the concept to be more like '10 things to do in an art gallery' as a bit of a joke, but I really don't know how I would bring the theoretical research into that.